I'll laugh upon ur dead body

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

Between two ppl the story begins....
within a small city with out no hints....

two who held a long story of pain....
together they thought happiness they gain...

the first gave love to whom he seeks...
but never felt it, even at the highest peak...

the second loved as stronge as he can...
but at the end from whom he loves was always ban...

the guy traveled from a star to another...
hoping to find something to show his mother...

the girl stayed pure as the moon...
with beauty not even descibed in loonytoon...

Finally he got the ticket to the goal...
but in between lies a black hole...

He arrived to the inner core...
where he thought he could score...

the girl, an angle from the outside...
A devil lies inside, should he hide?...

Stapped in the back he lies....
paying all the saddness he caused and price....

though there is a third part...
which may destroy wat's left of my heart....

the third part believed wht he seen....
or maybe he was puzzeled inbetween....

But thats not the point i wana stress...
an angle sword, was it blessed?....

to end in my back, no thats not fair....
wat u see is nothing but someone who doesn't care...

The guy dies, look at him he's dead...
but thats not me... still raising my head...

who died u may ask....
every sense of mercy i lack....

So imagin how dangerous i am.....
my revenge is doubled the harm....

Danger danger.. i promise u will...
look at me and get ready for the kill....

but keep looking, look at my eyes...
remember how u played with me like dice....

now die, wat will happen to me?...
I'm dead remember, may god bless me....

by ME

[Hassan Al-Ibrahim]

mashallah Abdul .. great poem and a great story

:) Akeed u have more to show us ..

[NMN]

but keep looking, look at my eyes...
remember how u played with me like dice....

now die, wat will happen to me?...
I'm dead remember, may god bless me....

by ME


nice poem..

i wonder how long did it take to write

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

mashallah Abdul .. great poem and a great story

:) Akeed u have more to show us ..

cheers man thats alot for passing

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

nice poem..

i wonder how long did it take to write

thanks alot

and it took about 20 mins

[R.A.A]

Nice poem brother

can you please explain the overall meaning of it because I don't get it.

Looking for it soon

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

Nice poem brother

can you please explain the overall meaning of it because I don't get it.

Looking for it soon

hehe

it means mainly tha sometimes u put ur trust of a person, on something, or on life

and sometimes you expect that u wont get anything back from that something

but u might and most ppl will get really sad but in the poem i explained that its oky to fall down but its never ok to stay down

there are other puzzels in the poem but i rather leave them to me to know and for u guys to figure out lol

thanks for passing by

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

May I add that this was written long time ago

It was written about last year actually and i just thought of sharring i guess :)

[R.A.A]

Thanks brother for the brief explanation and excuse my limited understanding of English literature.
Now I got it, and I can say it’s a meaningful poem. Good luck with this talent and looking forward hearing more of those poems. :)
Thanks

[Abdulla Al-Attiyah]

Thanks brother for the brief explanation and excuse my limited understanding of English literature.
Now I got it, and I can say it’s a meaningful poem. Good luck with this talent and looking forward hearing more of those poems. :)
Thanks

actually thank you for being interested and i sure hope u enjoied it
cheers
:)